dhcmrlchtdj__@lemmy.world to

Poetry@lemmy.world · 3 days ago

Randall Jarrell, "The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner"

4

17

Randall Jarrell, "The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner"

dhcmrlchtdj__@lemmy.world to

Poetry@lemmy.world · 3 days ago

4

Chat

Coelacanth
link
fedilink
arrow-up
3·
3 days ago
The poem as a whole felt a little so-so to me, but that last line hits like a truck.
- dhcmrlchtdj__@lemmy.worldOP
  link
  fedilink
  arrow-up
  4·
  3 days ago
  Agreed. Makes me wonder if that might’ve been the intention of the opening. The poem is held up by the shock of the last line.
  - Coelacanth
    link
    fedilink
    arrow-up
    3·
    3 days ago
    Definitely smacks of a poem being engineered backwards from the conception of that one line, yes.

Poetry@lemmy.world

poetry@lemmy.world

You are not logged in. However you can subscribe from another Fediverse account, for example Lemmy or Mastodon. To do this, paste the following into the search field of your instance: !poetry@lemmy.world

A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.

Welcome to !poetry

Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag “[OC].”

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the “[FB]” tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.

Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.

Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!

Visibility: Public

This community can be federated to other instances and be posted/commented in by their users.

45 users / day
100 users / week
312 users / month
2.17K users / 6 months
3 local subscribers
1.36K subscribers
1.36K Posts
1.29K Comments
Modlog

mods:
Scaldart@lemmy.world