• Tangent5280@lemmy.world
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      1 year ago

      Thanks for posting. I especially like the anger at the end, refusing to let them go and keeping them alive in memory.

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      1 year ago

      Lovely poem. I really think David Foster Wallace could have ended up with a Nobel Price in Literature had he been able to go on.

      “Otherwise-only-probable soul” is a great sort of DFW-ian turn of phrase.