• hazeebabee@slrpnk.net
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    1 year ago

    I really enjoyed that! I think the first section was the strongest to me personally – it was more grounded in real events, while some of the other sections lost some of their power by becomming too abstract. I did enjoy the aspect of different interconnected characters setting up eachothers stories.

    I went ahead and shared it in my solarpunk bookclub, hopefully some more people will give it a read through!

    Also it might be worth crossposting to a solarpunk community, it really fits the vibe :)

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      Thanks for the feedback.

      I really enjoyed that! I think the first section was the strongest to me personally – it was more grounded in real events, while some of the other sections lost some of their power by becomming too abstract. I did enjoy the aspect of different interconnected characters setting up eachothers stories.

      I totally get that. Thing is I wanted to depict some of the drama from the Fediverse in there and then you have to necessarily get a little abstract. I tried to include some of the drama happening here on Lemmy, however, its still not as exciting as I would hope it to be.

      I went ahead and shared it in my solarpunk bookclub, hopefully some more people will give it a read through!

      That’s great!

      Also it might be worth crossposting to a solarpunk community, it really fits the vibe :)

      Will do, will do